When Claire agreed to clean a secluded woman’s house, she expected dirt and disorder, but what she discovered was far more disturbing: a house frozen in time.
Amidst all the chaos, Claire finds a stack of greeting cards that reveals a heartbreaking truth.
My phone rang as I packed my cleaning kit, another day, another house in need of attention.
‘Clean Slate Services, Claire here,’ I answered, jamming the phone between my ear and shoulder, checking the stock of microfibre cloths.
‘Hello?’ A voice answered, elderly and unsure.
‘My name is Margaret. My daughter said you post videos about helping people clean their homes?’
I smiled, remembering the before and after transformations that had attracted the unexpected attention.
‘My little cleaning business may not be world famous, but it serves a greater purpose.
It allows me to help people who need it for free,’ I said.
‘That’s about me,’ Margaret continued.
‘How can I help?’
‘It’s not for me,’ she whispered.
‘It’s for my neighbour, Eleanor. She needs help. She won’t ask for it, but she needs it.’
There was such a troubled tinge to her voice that I fell silent.
I’d heard that kind of anxiety before – when you watch someone fade away.
‘Tell me about Eleanor,’ I asked, sitting down on the nearest stool.
Margaret took a deep breath.
‘Her garden is overgrown, newspapers are lying on the porch, and when I tried to check on her last week, she barely opened the door.
When she opened it, I…I smelled a foul odour. And what I saw behind the door wasn’t important.’
My stomach clenched, and I realised what she was talking about.
‘It wasn’t like that before,’ Margaret continued.
‘She was always in her garden, her roses winning prizes at the village fair.
And then, one day… she just stopped. She’s a good person, Claire. Something terrible is going on.’
I didn’t hesitate.
Such calls don’t come at convenient times, but crises don’t wait.
‘I’ll be there in an hour,’ I promised.
‘What’s the address?’
After I hung up, I texted Ryan, my husband and business partner:
‘Emergency cleaning. Not sure how bad it is yet. May need help.’
His reply came quickly:
‘In touch. Let me know.’
I grabbed my initial assessment kit – gloves, mask, basic cleaning supplies, and a change of clothes.
I was always prepared for the worst.
Eleanor’s house was a modest one-story building with faded blue siding.
The lawn had become a raw meadow, and dead flowers dangled from neglected window boxes.
The mailbox tilted, overflowing with unopened envelopes.
I knocked and waited.
Silence.
A second knock, louder.
Finally, I heard footsteps.
The door opened just an inch, revealing a slit of a woman’s face.
She was pale, with dishevelled hair, her tired eyes widened when she saw my branded t-shirt.
‘I don’t need a cleaning service,’ she muttered, already trying to close the door.
‘I’m not selling anything,’ I said quickly, trying to speak softly.
‘Margaret asked me to come over. She’s worried about you. She thought you needed help.’
Eleanor’s jaw clenched.
‘I can manage on my own.’
I recognised this resistance, the same resistance my mother reacted when concerned neighbours or teachers asked about the slides of boxes that filled our house.
‘My mother used to say the same thing. ‘I can handle it.’
But sometimes coping means letting someone else help,’ I said softly.
‘Coping…’ – Eleanor whispered the words as if she barely dared to believe it.
Her eyes met mine for the first time, something flickered in them-maybe hope, maybe fatigue.
There was a long pause, as if she were weighing her options, then her face wrinkled.
‘I don’t even know where to start,’ she whispered.
‘You don’t have to,’ I reassured her.
‘That’s why I’m here. Maybe you could spend the day with Margaret while I work. It would be easier that way.’
Eleanor hesitated, then nodded. ‘Let me get my purse.’
She disappeared behind the door for a moment, returning with a worn cardigan and a leather bag.
She kept her eyes downcast, avoiding looking at her front yard.
Together we walked to Margaret’s house, which stood close by.
Eleanor moved carefully, each step calculated, her shoulders hunched as if she were carrying an invisible weight.
Margaret answered the door with a surprise that turned to joy.
‘Eleanor! How wonderful to see you outside!’ – she exclaimed, dragging her inside.
‘Come in, come in. I’ve just made fresh tea.’
Eleanor barely smiled as she crossed the threshold. ‘Thank you, Margaret.’
Margaret caught my gaze and silently said, ‘Thank you.’
I nodded and walked back to Eleanor’s house, pulling out my phone.
‘Ryan, I need you to bring some industrial trash bags and possibly a respirator.’
He arrived half an hour later with a box of heavy consumables in his hands.
As soon as he took one look inside the house, he exhaled sharply.
‘She lives like this?’ – He asked, his voice muffled by the mask he’d already put on.
I nodded. ‘Probably for a few years now.’
The house wasn’t packed floor to ceiling with rubbish, but you could feel the stifling atmosphere.
Plates covered in dried food formed unstable towers in the sink.
Mould crept along the skirting boards.
The air was heavy with neglect.
I pulled on gloves and a mask.
‘Focus on packing obvious rubbish in the living room and kitchen – rotten takeaway food wrappers, empty packaging, bottles.
I’ll take over the bedrooms.’
Ryan nodded, already opening the rubbish bag. ‘Got it. I’ll leave the sorting to you.’
I walked carefully through the living room, noticing the dust on the TV screen.
The master bedroom was in a similar state – clothes folded on chairs, the bed tangled in sheets that hadn’t been made in months.
Prescription bottles of antidepressants and sleeping pills lay among the clutter on the nightstand.
They were all in Eleanor’s name. Antidepressants. Sleeping pills. Another familiar sign.
But it was the second bedroom that stopped me.
I opened the door and felt like I was in a different house.
Dust floated in the air, catching the light that fell through the single dirty window.
Cobwebs hung like curtains and the lack of rubbish gave the room an abandoned look that amazed me.
A single bed stood against one of the walls, its surface covered in dust.
A model of the solar system hung from the ceiling, also covered in dust, the planets tilted at strange angles, frozen in time.
A dresser stood against the wall.
Inside I found children’s clothes, neatly folded: little t-shirts, superhero pyjamas, school uniforms.
My heart clenched. This wasn’t just a storage unit – this was a memorial.
I carefully closed the drawer and left the room, leaving it untouched.
I would dust later, but there were more pressing matters to attend to.
As I continued cleaning, I found framed photographs on the dusty shelf – shots of a young boy with dark curls smiling at the camera, and another where he’s sitting on a man’s shoulders, both laughing.
But something troubled me. There were no pictures of a boy over the age of ten.
The clothes I had found earlier were for a child around that age.
In the master bedroom, I found a small stack of birthday cards hidden in the nightstand drawer.
Each one was addressed to ‘Michael,’ from his first birthday to his thirteenth.
The last card was written in indistinct handwriting, but I could make out one phrase: ‘…because he would have turned thirteen today.’
‘Because he would have?’ The weight of those words weighed on me, and slowly things began to fall into place.
By mid-afternoon with Ryan, we had made significant progress.
The floors had been cleaned and the kerb was littered with bags of rubbish.
The kitchen worktops became visible and the living room was cleaned and disinfected.
‘I’ll start with the bathroom,’ Ryan said, filling a bucket with hot water and bleach.
‘I’ll finish up in here,’ I replied.
Opening the kitchen drawer in search of random cutlery, I found a yellowed newspaper neatly folded inside.
I almost threw it away, but then one name caught my attention: Eleanor.
The headline froze me: ‘Local father killed in high-speed crash on his way to hospital.’
The article said James was rushing to the hospital when he lost control of his car.
His ten-year-old son, Michael, had been taken to the same hospital earlier that afternoon by Eleanor, his mother.
James did not make it.
The article didn’t mention what happened to Michael, but the birthday cards and the second bedroom told the rest of the story.
No wonder it had all become too much for Eleanor to bear.
I wiped my hands on my jeans and went to Margaret’s house. I needed to talk to Eleanor.
She was sitting at the kitchen table, her hands clutching a cold cup of tea.
She looked at me when I entered, and there was a silent multitude of questions in her eyes.
I placed the folded newspaper in front of her. ‘I found this.’
Eleanor’s gaze lingered on the paper, then she looked away.
‘I should have thrown this away years ago,’ she whispered.
‘But you didn’t throw it away,’ I replied quietly. ‘And that’s okay.’
Silence stretched between us. Margaret stood at the sink with her arms folded.
‘Michael developed severe asthma when he was four,’ Eleanor finally said, her voice flat, as if the words had lost all their power.
‘We dealt with it for years, but…’ Her voice trembled.
‘His condition worsened suddenly. I had to take him to the hospital that day.
I called James, and…he was going too fast.’
Her breath caught. ‘He didn’t make it. And Michael…a week later, he left too.’
I reached across the table, placing my hand on hers. ‘The room. You left it exactly the same.’
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Eleanor nodded, a tear rolling down her cheek.
‘At first it didn’t seem right to me to change things.
Then it started to feel wrong to go in there at all.
So I just…closed the door.’
‘And the birthday cards?’ – I asked softly.
‘I couldn’t help myself.’
Eleanor wiped her eyes with her free hand.
‘For three years I bought Michael a birthday card.
I wrote him a message that I wanted him to read.
I thought I was just going through grief, but it just got more painful.
It was stupid.’
‘No,’ Margaret said firmly, sitting down next to Eleanor.
‘It’s not stupid.
It’s love.’
Eleanor finally broke down, her shoulders shaking from years of held back grief.
Margaret moved closer, wrapping her arms around her.
‘It wasn’t just Michael and James,’ Eleanor muttered through sobs.
‘It was about me, too.
Part of me died with them.
And I couldn’t cope with everything.
The house, the yard… it all seemed so pointless, so tedious.’
‘Grief can swallow you whole,’ I said quietly.
‘My mum went through something similar when Dad left.
Not the same thing, but… it all piled up.
Literally.’
Eleanor looked at me with red eyes.
‘How did she cope?’
‘She didn’t cope, not really.
Not on her own.’
I squeezed her hand.
‘She started seeing a counsellor, made friends in a support group.
It wasn’t a straight path to better things.’
Margaret gently stroked Eleanor’s back.
‘You don’t need to be alone in this anymore.’
Eleanor wiped her eyes again.
‘Home…is it awful?’
‘Nothing that can’t be fixed,’ I reassured her.
‘We’ve done a good job.
Do you want to see it?’
Eleanor nodded, and a few moments later she was standing in the doorway of her house, hesitating.
Ryan stood at the side, a nervous half-smile on his face.
‘We’re not done yet,’ he explained, ’but almost.’
Eleanor entered, moving slowly through the transformed living room, touching the cleaned surfaces as if she couldn’t believe it.
When she reached the door to the second bedroom, she froze.
‘We haven’t touched this room,’ I said quickly.
‘I wanted to ask you first.’
Eleanor nodded, but didn’t open the door.
‘Thank you,’ she said, turning to us.
‘Thank you both.’
Her eyes filled with tears again, but these were different-maybe relief or the first glimmer of peace.
‘We’ll be back tomorrow to finish up,’ I said.
‘The bathroom needs more work, and the yard…’
‘Yes,’ Eleanor said, and for the first time I saw the shadow of a smile.
‘That would be…yes.’
The next morning Eleanor was ready when we arrived.
She was wearing a clean blouse, her hair neatly brushed.
‘Margaret invited me to breakfast,’ she said.
‘And then we might look at plants for the garden.
If that’s okay?’
‘It’s perfect,’ I replied.
By mid-afternoon, the house was transformed.
Not perfect, but livable.
Clean.
Fresh.
When Eleanor returned, Margaret was with her, carrying a small tray of potted herbs.
‘For the kitchen window,’ Margaret explained.
Eleanor looked round her house, her yard, her life – everything now visible, everything available again.
‘I don’t know how to thank you,’ she said.
‘You don’t have to,’ I replied.
While Ryan and I gathered our things, I watched Eleanor and Margaret at the kitchen table drinking coffee.
Something changed in Eleanor, as if a door had opened, letting in light.
Ryan caught my gaze and smiled.
‘Another successful clean slate?’
I nodded, watching the two women through the window as we walked to our van.
‘The cleanest one yet.’
